the silver column shivers
like my pinking neck
wafting from the sky,
birds and flakes nearing feeders
jostle for position
fragrant breakfast tea
cozy in my idling car
steams up the windshield
dodge and weave through slushy lanes
with colorless protest
7 comments:
Criminy - MORE snow?
I've had enough of this stuff.
Let's move to Cancun.
LOL...
EXCELLENT addition!
Are you sure it's spelled "crimony"? From sonnet to haiku...aaahhh.
Genie? Mary?
Apparently both spellings are correct, and in the research thereof I learned that I should be more careful with my vocabulary selection - silly me to think that it was simply an old-fashioned interjection:
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/criminy
criminy - Alternative spelling: crimony
Interjection: criminy
Definition: Curse word of the 1600’s meaning Christ.
Mea culpa - it was never my intention to use the Lord's name in vain.
Re-wind/Re-write:
Ack Ack Ack - MORE snow?
I've had enough of this stuff.
See you at the beach.
Huh. Who knew? :-)
Apparently Mr or Ms Anonymous knew - but won't admit to it.
Guess I'll have to spell-check my postings next time.....
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